(1) On my nineteenth birthday, I began my trip to Mali, West Africa. (2) Some 24 hours later I arrived in
Bamako, the capital of Mali. (3) The sun had set and the night was starless. (4) One of the officials from the
literacy program I was working was there to meet me. (5) After the melee in the baggage claim, we proceeded
to his car. (6) Actually, it was a truck. (7) I was soon to learn that most people in Mali that had automobiles
actually had trucks or SUVs. (8) Apparently, there not just a convenience but a necessity when you live on the
edge of the Sahara. (9) I threw my bags into the bed of the truck, and hopped in to the back of the cab. (10)
Riding to my welcome dinner, I stared out the windows of the truck and took in the city. (11) It was truly a
foreign land to me, and I knew that I was an alien there. (12) “What am I doing here?” I thought.
(13) It is hard to believe but seven months later I returned to the same airport along the same road that I had
traveled on that first night in Bamako, and my perspective on the things that I saw had completely changed.
(14) The landscape that had once seemed so desolate and lifeless now was the homeland of people that I had
come to love. (15) When I looked back at the capital, Bamako, fast receding on the horizon, I did not see a city
foreboding and wild in its foreignness. (16) I saw the city which held so many dear friends. (17) I saw tea
drinking sessions going late into the night.
(18) I saw the hospitality and open-heartedness of the people of Mali. (19) The second time, everything looked
completely different, and I knew that it was I who had changed and not it.
Which of the following is revision of sentence 4?
One of the officials from the literacy program I was working was there to meet me.